Writing Class

Writing Class

الاثنين، 2 نوفمبر 2015

Organization in paragraph: Example

 Please correct and rewrite the following paragraph:

The wise man would always keep his body fit because a healthy mind can work only in a healthy body. The human body is a wonderful piece of work that nature has created.  It is not beautiful like the body of a butterfly or peacock but it is shaped practically.  It can do many types of work which other animals cannot.  It is not strong like the body of a tiger.  But in place of physical strength it has a big and sharp brain. It can do many types of work which other animals cannot. 



When you finish, please post it in your blog.

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  1. Done by mostafa haj hamoud

    link :

    http://mostafahaj.blogspot.com/2015/11/the-wise-man-would-always-keep-his-body.html

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