Organization in paragraph: Example

 Please correct and rewrite the following paragraph:

The wise man would always keep his body fit because a healthy mind can work only in a healthy body. The human body is a wonderful piece of work that nature has created.  It is not beautiful like the body of a butterfly or peacock but it is shaped practically.  It can do many types of work which other animals cannot.  It is not strong like the body of a tiger.  But in place of physical strength it has a big and sharp brain. It can do many types of work which other animals cannot. 

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Organization in a Paragraph

What is a paragraph?

A paragraph is the basic unit of composition. It consists of a group of related sentences that develop one main idea. It has three main parts; an introduction, a body of the paragraph and a conclusion. In other words, it has a topic sentence, a few supporting sentences, and a concluding sentence. What is coherence in a paragraph? Coherence means establishing a relationship between the ideas presented in a paragraph. It brings about a rationale in the arrangement of the ideas which are introduced either in the chronological order or in the order of importance. Besides, transitions that compare, contrast, illustrate, add or show cause and effect build logical bridges. The ideas, thus expressed in the paragraph, flow smoothly from one to the other in a logical sequence. This helps the reader to understand the paragraph. Coherence in a paragraph is the technique of making words, phrases, and sentences move smoothly and logically from one to the other. It is obvious that if a paragraph is not unified, does not have a logical order, and does not have a consistent point of view, the reader is unlikely to grasp the point of the paragraph. In addition, there are other devices and techniques that will help you achieve coherence. in the next article, i will provide you with an example of a paragraph that lack organization.

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